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The graph shows average prices of hoses in sometown in 2005.

The graph shows average prices of hoses in sometown in 2005. 6aB6B
The line graph given the information about hosing average cost in sometown in 2005. The data has been calibrated in thousand dollars. Overall, it is clearly shown that the price of both sold and on the market experienced fluctuation over the period. As apparent in the graph, the sold houses stood at 300 thousands dollars in the first month. After that the figure increasrd slightly around $302, 000. There had a rapid decrease in sold houses from $ 302, 000 to 290, 000 dollars in September. Between September to october, the number of sold houses cost leveled off excatly 290 thousand dollars. Then, the figures witnessed a dramatic increase from 290 thousand to almost 310 thoudand dollars in December. From unsold houses graph, the houses on market started at nearly 335, 000 dollars decresed rapidly from 335 thousand dollars to 320 thousand dollars in the eight month of given year. Next month, the figure climbed in unsold houses excatly half of fell in previous month, it accounted for $ 330 thousands. Finally, the available houses in the market of declined at approximately $325, 000 and $320, 000 in November and December respectively.
The line graph
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the information about hosing average cost in
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sometown
in 2005. The data has
been calibrated
in
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thousand
dollars.

Overall
, it is
clearly
shown that the price of both sold and on the market experienced fluctuation over the period.

As apparent in the graph, the sold
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houses
stood at 300 thousands
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dollars
in the
first
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month
. After that the figure
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increasrd
slightly
around $302, 000. There had a rapid decrease in sold
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houses
from
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$ 302
, 000 to 290, 000
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dollars
in September. Between September to
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october
, the number of sold
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houses
cost leveled off
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excatly
290 thousand
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dollars
. Then, the figures witnessed a dramatic increase from 290 thousand to almost 310
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thoudand
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dollars
in December.

From unsold
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houses
graph, the
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houses
on market
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started
at
nearly
335, 000
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dollars
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decresed
rapidly
from 335 thousand
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dollars
to 320 thousand
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dollars
in the eight
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month
of
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given
year.
Next
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, the figure climbed in unsold
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houses
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excatly
half of fell in previous
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month
, it accounted for
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$ 330
thousands.
Finally
, the available
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houses
in the market of declined at approximately $325, 000 and $320, 000 in November and December
respectively
.
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