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The two maps demonstrate changes

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The two maps demonstrate changes to the Colwick Arts Center between 2005 and now. It is clear that the Arts center made many changes during this time, including new buildings and recreation. In the past, two galleries located on the right-hand that merged and in addition relocated to the left. In 2005 there was a huge building consist of concert hall and cinema in center of the map that today is demolished. The wasteland on the bottom of the map was developed a new recreation area with a stage, trees and outdoor exhibition and performance area. What is more a café was built between gallery and outdoor exhibition area. So, we can see conversion and redevelopment of the Colwick Arts Center during this period.
The two maps demonstrate
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changes
to the Colwick Arts Center between 2005 and
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now
. It is
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clear
that the Arts center made
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many
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changes
during this time, including new buildings and recreation.

In the past, two galleries located on the right-hand that merged and
in addition
relocated to the
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left
. In 2005 there was a huge building consist of concert hall and cinema in center of the map that
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today
is demolished
.

The wasteland on the bottom of the map
was developed
a new recreation area with a stage, trees and outdoor exhibition and performance area.
What is more
a café
was built
between gallery and outdoor exhibition area.

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, we can
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see
conversion and redevelopment of the Colwick Arts Center during this period.
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IELTS academic The two maps demonstrate changes

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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