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The line chart illustrates the proportion of unusable products from three factories between 2000 and 2015.

The line chart illustrates the proportion of unusable products from three factories between 2000 and 2015. p3Y3

The line chart illustrates the proportion of unusable products from three factories between 2000 and 2015. Overall, it is clear that factory A and B have reduced the amount of waste products since 2005, while factory C was the only factory where waste production was increased over this time period. In 2000, the majority of worthless products was from factory A with 12 tonnes. While, factory B was the second and factory C was the third by producing around 8 and 4 tonnes of worthless products, respectively In 2005, there was an increase in unused products from frim B and C. Whereas, firm A experienced a gradual decrease since then. Surprisingly, after 2005, the amount of unused products from firm B was sharply fall from about 10 tonnes to 3 tonnes in 2015. In contrast, frim C was the only one where created a tremendous of rubbishes. The figures climed every year, untill 2015, they generated the most of rubbishes over 9 tonnes.

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factories
 between 2000 and 2015.

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factory
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reduced
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products
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factory
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factory
 where waste production was increased
 over this time period.

In 2000, the majority of worthless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
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factory
 A with 12 tonnes. While, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopfirmcooperativeindustryworkshopbranch
factory
 B was the second and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopfirmcooperativeindustryworkshopbranch
factory
 C was the third by producing around 8 and 4 tonnes of worthless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
, respectively


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 from about 10 tonnes to 3 tonnes in 2015. In contrast
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