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The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Yeqj

The given pie charts represents the percentages of house energy use and the effects of greenhouse gas emissions in Australia. Overall, it is noticeable that majority of Australian use electricity for heating while water heating has the highest proportion for the results of gas emissions. However, heating is not the main factors that indicate global warming. Focusing on the energy use of household, 42% of the participant use heating the most. In addition, the proportion of water heating is double the rate energy use for other appliances( 30% and 15%, respectively). On the contrary, Australia residents use the electricity for cooling the least, which is 2%. Turning to the household greenhouse effects, mostly the results come from water heating (32%). Furthermore, the energy use by the other appliances is double the percentages of the fridge. Interestingly, ever though people use energy for heating the most, it produce less gas emissions than other gadgets.

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