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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. jNA8
The given floor plans shows a double room and a single student room at an Australian university. Overall, the double room has two beds and study desks as opposed to the one-person room. In comparison, the double room is 1. 5 meters wider than the one-person room, with 4 and 2. 5 meters, respectively. Nevertheless, both rooms have the same length. In addition, the price in the double room is $350 per week whereas the single room is $200/week. An analysis of the plans show that in both rooms the toilet is located in the upper left corner. Furthermore, they both also have one study desk right next to the bathroom and one bed in the upper right corner, just next to the window. The double student room has a bookshelf on the left of the study desk as compared to the single room which does not have it. If we take a look at the down left corner of both rooms we can see the kitchen, which has a stove, a sink and a microwave included. Additionally, there is also a TV in both rooms located just on the right side of the kitchen, on the wall. Futhermore, the two-people room has a wall dividing both beds and study desks and on the left end of the wall there is a table with two chairs.
The
given
floor plans
shows
a
double
room
and a single student
room
at an Australian university.
Overall
, the
double
room
has two beds and
study
desks
as opposed to the one-person
room
.
In comparison
, the
double
room
is 1. 5 meters wider than the one-person
room
, with 4 and 2. 5 meters,
respectively
.
Nevertheless
, both
rooms
have the same length.
In addition
, the price in the
double
room
is $350 per week whereas the single
room
is $200/week.

An analysis of the plans
show
that in both
rooms
the toilet
is located
in the upper
left
corner.
Furthermore
, they both
also
have one
study
desk
right
next
to the bathroom and one bed in the upper right corner,
just
next
to the window. The
double
student
room
has a bookshelf on the
left
of the
study
desk
as compared to the single
room
which does not have it. If we take a look at the down
left
corner of both
rooms
we can
see
the kitchen, which has a stove, a sink and a microwave included.
Additionally
, there is
also
a TV in both
rooms
located
just
on the right side of the kitchen, on the wall.
Futhermore
, the two-
people
room
has a wall dividing both beds and
study
desks
and on the
left
end
of the wall there is a table with two chairs.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

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226 words
6.0
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