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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. 8Yk5

The layouts below give informations about a student room for two and single inhabitants at an Australian university. In addition, there is a list of key symbols which explain furnitures in these plans. Overall, it can be clearly seen that while twin-bed room is more expensive, the cost per week per person is by far more economical. The weekly expenses of the room for two students is 350 USD. With a size of 6 by 4 squared-meters, the room is consist of 2 beds, 2 study desks, 2 cupboards. Furthermore, there are a bathroom, a television, a sink, a stove, a bookshelves, a wardrobe, a microwave and a set of tables and chairs. On the other hand, the weekly rental for a single inhabitant room cost 200 USD. While a smaller size of 6 by 2. 5 squared-meters, there are no any set of table and chairs, a cupboard and a bookshelf. Moreover, the furnitures which come in twice in the twin-room are only prepared in single.

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informations
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 that while twin-bed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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The weekly expenses of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 for two students is 350 USD. With a size of 6 by 4 squared-meters, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 is consist of 2 beds, 2 study desks, 2 cupboards. Furthermore
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bathroom
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, a wardrobe, a microwave and a set of tables and chairs.

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 any set of table and chairs, a cupboard and a bookshelf. Moreover
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