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The line chart illustrates the number of schoolchildren in three nations over for fifteen years (2000-2015).

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The line chart illustrates the number of schoolchildren in three nations over for fifteen years (2000-2015). Overall, the number of scholar pupils in America increased during the research period. While the figure for Russia and France experienced the most dramatic change during the period shown. In 2000, the number of schoolboys in France, Russia, and America accounted for around 3, 5 million, 3 million, 1, 5 million respectively. Between 2000-2005, there was a slight climb in the number of undergraduates in America from 1, 5 million to 2 million. During the same period, the same category for France and Russia decreased significantly by around 1 million and 0, 8 million respectively. The number of learners in Russia saw a minimal decline over five years, from 2, 2 million in 2005 to 1, 8 million in 2010. In 2010, the figure for France rose enormously to about 3 million, which was roughly 2 million lower than that in 2015. In 2015, the number of scholar pupils in Russia made up approximately 2, 8 million, which was a- twice in America.
The line chart illustrates the
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of schoolchildren in three nations over for fifteen years (2000-2015).

Overall
, the
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of scholar pupils in America increased during the research period. While the figure for Russia and France experienced the most dramatic
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during the period shown.

In 2000, the
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of schoolboys in France, Russia, and America accounted for around 3, 5
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, 3
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, 1, 5
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respectively
. Between 2000-2005, there was a slight climb in the
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of undergraduates in America from 1, 5
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to 2
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. During the same period, the same category for France and Russia decreased
significantly
by around 1
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and 0, 8
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respectively
.

The
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of learners in Russia
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a minimal decline over five years, from 2, 2
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in 2005 to 1, 8
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in 2010. In 2010, the figure for France rose
enormously
to about 3
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, which was roughly 2
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lower than that in 2015. In 2015, the
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of scholar pupils in Russia made up approximately 2, 8
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, which was a- twice in America.

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