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all children should study a foreign language

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I think learning a foreign language, actually an international language, should start as soon as possible. In my opinion, everything that we have learned in our childhood, remains like forever. I remember that, every time i talk with my grandparents, they told me stories about their childhood, mainly about their memories about school, their classroom and their lessons, especially the poems they learnt in the school and every time they surprised me by remembering the whole poem without any mistake. I think children and young people have better mind for learning, that is why we learn basic knowledge in elementary School. Nowadays, study a foreign language is more important than what people think. It is necessary for people who wants to communicate abroad, who wants to travel around the world, who wants to extend her or his business and more. By learning it from young ages, we can learn it more comfortable and with convenient. I always see people who talk like an native speaker and when i asked them the reasons of that, They tell me they started learning that language at a young age. Maybe the reason of learning better in childhood, is their mind are free without any stress and worry. So. i think it is better to start study a foreign language at young age and keep learning until get best at it
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in the school and every time they surprised me by remembering the whole poem without any mistake.

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,
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why we learn basic knowledge in elementary School.

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is more
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wants to extend her or his business and more. By
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ages, we can learn it more comfortable and with convenient. I always
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better in childhood, is their mind are free without any
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and worry.

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IELTS academic all children should study a foreign language

Academic
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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