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The Line chart illustrates the number of people who move to the city in three different countries

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The Line chart illustrates the number of people who move to the city in three different countries from 2020 to 2025, a period of 25 years. Overall, all three countries the flow of people moving to the urban areas have been increasing steadily in a period. However, Country B has the lowest growing rate of all. In 2000, all out of three countries had under 20 millions of people who move to the city from the countryside, the lowest number was Country C’s citizen. The number of citizens move to the city increased gradually, until country B took over country C after 2005, and have had the biggest rise among others two nations, which will stope at just under 100 millions “city immigrants” in 2025, unlike country B, who had a far slower growing rate and than levelled out from 2020 at approximately 30 millions citizens move to the city. In a period of 10 years, country A’s data climbed to just over 40 millions people, and this highly increasing rate is predicted to stay the same until 2025, which will stop at under 90 millions citizens move from the rural areas to the city.
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from 2020 to 2025, a period of 25 years.

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, all three
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the flow of
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moving to the urban areas have been increasing

steadily
in a period.
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B has the lowest growing rate of all.

In 2000, all out of three
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had under 20
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countryside, the lowest number was
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C’s
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citizen
. The number of
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move
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increased
gradually
, until
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B took over
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C after 2005, and have had the biggest rise

among others two nations, which will
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stope at
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under 100
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millions
“city immigrants” in 2025,

unlike
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B, who had a far slower growing rate and
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levelled out from 2020 at

approximately 30
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millions
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to the city. In a period of 10 years,
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A’s data climbed

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over 40
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2025, which will
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IELTS academic The Line chart illustrates the number of people who move to the city in three different countries

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