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The pie chart below shows the basic reason for agricultural land is not so productive

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The pie chart illustrates the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table provides how these causes affected three regions of rhe world during the 1990s. Overall, The highest percentage of over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation is greater then other in world wide land degradation. In respect over-grazing, The highest percentage of Land Degradation is almost 35%. Meanwhile, deforestation and over-cultivation the land degradation is almost same. As opposed to, The lowest percentage of land degradation is about 7% in other. On the other hand, The most amount of total land degraded was almost 23% by region in europe. As opposed to, total land degraded was significant among of the table as we can seen that about 13% land degraded by is oceania. Interestingly, The lowest land degraded by 5% was nort America by region in 1995s.
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. In respect over-grazing, The highest percentage of
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is almost 35%. Meanwhile, deforestation and over-cultivation the
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is almost same. As opposed to, The lowest percentage of
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is about 7% in other.
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degraded was almost 23% by region in
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degraded was significant among of the table as we can
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that about 13%
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