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the table below shows the difference in prices of local and imported fruits throughout the year

the table below shows the difference in prices of local and imported fruits throughout the year 0a089

The graph demonstrates the differences in prices of local and imported fruits through four seasons. It can be deduced that the goods from abroad are available across the whole year, unlike local ones. According to the data shown, local products have more fluctuations, particularly strawberries, which have the highest price at around $6-8. The cost of apples in January and October are remarkably similar - $4. 35 and $4. 50- but in Autumn and Winter this indicators markedly drop to 3. 75 and 2. 25 dollars. As well as apples, local oranges show the same index in January. In Winter and Spring months experience a period of instability, while in April they are out of stock. It is important to note that the imported vegetations demonstrate lower variation. Such oranges are more expensive than local ones and vary within a range of $5. Another interesting point is that bananas remain at relatively the same level throughout a year $2. 99.

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local
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 from abroad are available across the whole year, unlike You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
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 the same index in January. In Winter and Spring months experience a period of instability, while in April they are out of stock.

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 demonstrate lower variation. Such oranges are more expensive than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
 ones and vary within a range of $5. Another interesting point is that bananas remain at relatively
 the same level throughout a year $2. 99. 