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The table illustrates hard goods(central heating, TV, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher, and phone)users in Britain over the period from 1972 to 1983.

The table illustrates hard goods(central heating, TV, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher, and phone)users in Britain over the period from 1972 to 1983. BLVRp
The table illustrates hard goods(central heating, TV, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher, and phone)users in Britain over the period from 1972 to 1983. Overall, it is clear from the table, the whole percentages of household items rose during nine years and the most essential durable goods were television and vacuum cleaner. Television, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator and washing machine account for over 60% of household items, while the dishwasher wasn't very common between Britain people and the proportion of it was only 3% and 5% in 1978 and 1983, respectively. In addition, namely central heating, experienced the most percentage changing in comparison with all mentioned products. Furthermore, the rate was 39% in 1972 and 64% in 1983. By contrast, the phone item was 42% in 1972 and rose by 35%. It was the greatest increase amongst all the products. No data is given for video from 1972 to 1982. on the contrary, in 1983 the rate was 18%.
The table illustrates
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(central heating, TV, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher, and phone)users in Britain over the period from 1972 to 1983.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the table, the whole percentages of household items rose during nine years and the most essential durable
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goods
were television and vacuum cleaner.

Television, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator and washing machine account for over 60% of household items, while the dishwasher wasn't
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very
common between Britain
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people
and the proportion of it was
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only
3% and 5% in 1978 and 1983,
respectively
.
In addition
,
namely
central heating, experienced the most percentage changing
in comparison
with all mentioned products.
Furthermore
, the rate was 39% in 1972 and 64% in 1983.

By contrast, the phone item was 42% in 1972 and rose by 35%. It was the greatest increase amongst all the products. No data is
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given
for video from 1972 to 1982.
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on
the contrary, in 1983 the rate was 18%.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates hard goods(central heating, TV, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher, and phone)users in Britain over the period from 1972 to 1983.

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