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The chart below show the sales figures for children's toys in 2012 and 2016 in six different countries.

The chart below show the sales figures for children's toys in 2012 and 2016 in six different countries. gApBd

The bar chart illustrates how toys for children changed in sales in two selected years in several domestic markets. In general, this type of product increased in sales value in most of the countries where it was sold, especially UK and India where growth was the strongest of about 2 billion US dollars. From the aspect of size, UK and USA were the two largest markets among the six, exceeding the others by many folds. UK was undoubtedly the leading market for children’s toys, with sales record hitting $6 billion in 2012 before climbing up by 33% to $8 4 years later. Another major stronghold of toys for kids was the USA whose figures increased very slightly yet enough to secure the second place in value despite the fact that its sales were just half as valuable as UK’s. Customers in other countries were reported to spend less than some $1 billion on toys for children in 2012. The only fact that is worth noticing about this group of markets is the surge in expenditure on toys to $2 billion reported in 2016 in India who originally and technically generated almost no revenue out of the children’s toys industry 4 years ago.

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