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The given two maps show appearance of the city in 1995 and present.

The given two maps show appearance of the city in 1995 and present. JVP6a
The given two maps show appearance of the city in 1995 and present. Overall golf and tennis courts were built in place of the farmland and forest park in the green areas without major changes. In 1995 there is a river on the south side and there is a shipping port which connects the middle of the river with the land. There are farmland and forests park on the northeast side. On the north side of the road near the river are a number of shops, and in front of them is a fish market. As for the current appearance of the city, apartments were built instead of the fish market near the sea and restaurants were built instead of the shops on the north side of the road. The shipping port at sea has been completely removed. A car park was built next to the hotel at the intersection of the main roads.
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appearance of the city in 1995 and present.
Overall
golf and tennis courts
were built
in place of the farmland and forest park in the green areas without major
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changes
. In 1995 there is a river on the south side and there is a shipping port which connects the middle of the river with the land. There are farmland and forests park on the northeast side. On the north side of the road near the river are a number of shops, and in front of them is a fish market. As for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
appearance of the city, apartments
were built
instead
of the fish market near the sea and restaurants
were built
instead
of the shops on the north side of the road. The shipping port at sea has been completely removed. A car park
was built
next
to the hotel at the intersection of the main roads.

IELTS academic The given two maps show appearance of the city in 1995 and present.

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