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The line chart illustrates information about the proportion of New Zealand inhabitants between 1950 and 2020 and the projection until 2050.

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The line chart illustrates information about the proportion of New Zealand inhabitants between 1950 and 2020 and the projection until 2050. A glance at the graph reveals that while the share of people aged 38 to 45 and 0 to 14 increased, the figure for citizens aged 25-37 and over 65 decreased. The most dramatic fall was seen in the figure for 25-37 years old. In 1950, the people who belonged to the over 65 age group accounted for the highest figure, at approximately 60%, followed by around 20% for 39 to 45 and 25-37 years old. The figure for 0 to 14 years old was lower, at just above 0%. After a period of 40 years, there was an upward trend in the New Zealand's residents who fall into the 38 to 45 and over 65 groups rose steeply to nearly 50% and 70% while the figure for children who aged 0 to 14 declined slightly and hit the bottom. There was a period of stability for people 25 to 37 years old. By 2050, the quantity of people who belong to 38 to 45 and over 65 years old is anticipated to reduce gradually by 10%, a similar pattern can be seen for 25 to 37, with a sharp fall to 0%. In contrast, between 0 to 14 years old will soar rapidly to 20%.
The line chart illustrates information about the proportion of New Zealand inhabitants between 1950 and 2020 and the projection until 2050.

A glance at the graph reveals that while the share of
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people
aged 38 to 45 and 0 to 14
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increased
, the
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figure
for citizens aged 25-37 and
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over
65 decreased. The most dramatic fall was
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seen
in the
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figure
for 25-37 years
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old
.

In 1950, the
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people
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who
belonged to the
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over
65 age group accounted for the highest
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figure
, at approximately 60%, followed by around 20% for 39 to 45 and 25-37 years
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old
. The
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figure
for 0 to 14 years
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old
was lower, at
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just
above 0%. After a period of 40 years, there was an upward trend in the New Zealand's residents
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who
fall into the 38 to 45 and
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over
65 groups rose
steeply
to
nearly
50% and 70% while the
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figure
for children
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who
aged 0 to 14 declined
slightly
and hit the bottom. There was a period of stability for
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people
25 to 37 years
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old
.

By 2050, the quantity of
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people
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who
belong to 38 to 45 and
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over
65 years
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old
is anticipated
to
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reduce
gradually
by 10%, a similar pattern can be
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seen
for 25 to 37, with a sharp fall to 0%.
In contrast
,
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between 0 to 14
years
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will soar
rapidly
to 20%.
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrates information about the proportion of New Zealand inhabitants between 1950 and 2020 and the projection until 2050.

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