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The bar graph illustrates the physical activity of Australian men and women in varied age groups in the year 2010.

The bar graph illustrates the physical activity of Australian men and women in varied age groups in the year 2010. YdaWV

The bar graph illustrates the physical activity of Australian men and women in varied age groups in the year 2010. There is an upward trend in the physical activity of women, except at a later age. Contradictorily, apart from fluctuations, there is an overall decline in the physical activity of males. The data suggest that females' physical activity is higher than males', except for inevitable fluctuations during the initial and final years. Women aged in the 35-64 group, record the most increased physical activity, nearly between 52-54%. It is equal to the percentage of males' physical activity in the age of 15-24. Females in the age group of 15-24 have the least physical activity, similar to the trend followed by men and women at the age of 65 and above. There is a downfall in the activity of males reaching 39. 5%, from the age of 15-24 to the age of 35-44 before following an upward trend at the latter period. It can be apprehended that the physical activity for both groups over the age of 65 and above is near equal, with population numbers between 46-47%.

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