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The given diagram provides an clear overview of the procedure regarding how geothermal energy functions to generate electricity by five stages. It depicts how cold water, the injection well, the production well, condenser, turbine and generator collaborate to ensure the plant runs successfully. The first stage of the process starts from cold water segment. Cold water would be pumped down through a 4. 5 km tube to the injection well in the underground. And then, the water would be bond to flow through the geothermal zone which is comprised of hot rocks, and go to the production well. Right after that, the hot water is going to be pumped up from the ground and enter the condenser. Next, the steam, which produce in the condenser,  will follow shortly to the generator and turbine sector. The turbine will be operated effectively by the power of steam while generator would run by the power of the turbine. Collectively, the electricity is created by the power of the mass. All in all, It is obvious that final step is the most crucial and complex one during the whole producing, which predetermines the result of the whole operation.
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overview of the procedure regarding how geothermal energy functions to generate electricity by five stages. It depicts how
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cold
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water
, the injection well, the production well, condenser,
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turbine
and generator collaborate to ensure the plant runs
successfully
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water
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down through a 4. 5 km tube to the injection well in the underground. And then, the
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water
would be
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to flow through the geothermal zone which
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is comprised of
hot rocks, and go to the production well.

Right after that, the hot
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water
is going to
be pumped
up from the ground and enter the condenser.
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, the steam, which produce in the condenser,
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will follow shortly to the generator and
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turbine
sector. The
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turbine
will
be operated
effectively
by the power of steam while generator would run by the power of the
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turbine
.
Collectively
, the electricity
is created
by the power of the mass.

All in all, It is obvious that final step is the most crucial and complex one during

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whole producing, which predetermines the result of the whole operation.
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IELTS academic geothermal energy function

Academic
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5 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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