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the life cycle of the mosquito

the life cycle of the mosquito 96LMn
The provided diagram gives information about the period of female mosquitoe’s development. Overall, it takes 6 - 8 weeks to grow and finish a circle. There are 7 main steps, beginning laying eggs and finishing with the adult individual. First of all, the eggs are produced in the water. After one week, the egg started to break and form into a first larval stage. During three week larvae grow up and have four evolution periods. Water is a necessary part of their habitat. At each of these stages of larval, it becomes bigger than the previous one and continuously changes in its shape by molting. After the fourth change, larvae turn to pupils in the sixth week. This is the time the mosquito changes into an adult. They still live in an aquatic environment. When development is complete, the pupal skin splits and the adult mosquito emerges. Inclusion, the lifespan of the female mosquito takes in a number of different phenomena at various locations and each stage plays an important role in this general process. The first three stages occur in water, but the adult is an active flying insect.
The provided diagram gives information about the period of female
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mosquitoe
’s development.
Overall
, it takes
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6 - 8
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weeks
to grow and finish a circle. There are 7 main steps, beginning laying eggs and finishing with the adult individual.

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First of all
, the eggs
are produced
in the water. After one
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week
, the egg
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started
to break and form into a
first
larval
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stage
. During three
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week
larvae grow up and have four evolution periods. Water is a necessary part of their habitat. At each of these
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stages
of larval, it becomes bigger than the previous one and
continuously
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changes
in its shape by molting. After the fourth
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change
, larvae turn to pupils in the sixth
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week
. This is the time the
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mosquito
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changes
into an adult. They
still
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live
in an aquatic environment. When development is complete, the pupal skin splits and the adult
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mosquito
emerges.

Inclusion, the lifespan of the female
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mosquito
takes in a number of
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different
phenomena at various locations and each
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stage
plays an
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important
role in this general process. The
first
three
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stages
occur in water,
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but
the adult is an active flying insect.
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IELTS academic the life cycle of the mosquito

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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