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The diagram illustrates the process of water treatment and the required stages.

The diagram illustrates the process of water treatment and the required stages. Nwro0
Firstly, from the ocean water is taken from the intake screens and the motor pumps the unfiltered liquid through the pipes, where it is mixed with Oxidants named Polyaluminum Chloride and sent for Flocculation, in which the dirt particles known as leaves, plastic waste are extracted from the water and settles in settling bin where dust is removed. Later chlorine mixed with water, then sent into filter membrane. In this process remaining waste and dust particles are removed and it is sent for disinfection. In which chlorine, lime and fluoride removed and pumped through the faucet. Finally, from the faucet water can be used for drinking, washing vegetables and fruits, also used for various purpose. This is continuous process till the water can be used for our needs.
Firstly
, from the ocean
water
is taken
from the intake screens and the motor pumps the unfiltered liquid through the pipes, where it
is mixed
with Oxidants named
Polyaluminum
Chloride and
sent
for
Flocculation
, in which the dirt particles known as
leaves
, plastic waste
are extracted
from the
water
and settles in settling bin where dust
is removed
. Later chlorine mixed with
water
, then
sent
into filter membrane. In this process remaining waste and dust particles
are removed
and it is
sent
for disinfection. In which chlorine, lime and fluoride removed and pumped through the faucet.
Finally
, from the faucet
water
can be
used
for drinking, washing vegetables and fruits,
also
used
for various purpose. This is continuous process till the
water
can be
used
for our needs.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process of water treatment and the required stages.

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  American English
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