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The diagram illustrates the life cycle of silkworm and different stages of silk production.

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of silkworm and different stages of silk production. O6V77

Firstly, the moth lays eggs on the leaf, in the headway silkworm larva emerges out of the eggs and they eat the leaf called mulberry as a food. Secondly, after 4-6 weeks the larva produces silk thread and the thread is attached to the larva. Next 3-8 days the larva emerged as a cocoon. Then the next 16 days are crucial for the transition of a Moth. The moth comes out of the cocoon and after that it starts laying eggs. For the production of silk cloth, first we need to choose the best cocoon. Secondly, boil it inside the water. Then unwind it to 300-900m and form like a thread. Next, the loose threads are rotated inorder to form a strong silk. Then the silk should be dyed according to the color we require. After that remove the dyed silk outside and let it dry for somedays. Finally, the silk is produced and ready to use.

Firstly
, the moth lays eggs on the leaf, in the headway silkworm larva emerges out of the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).eggs, and
eggs and
 they eat the leaf called mulberry as Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "food".food
a food
. Secondly
, after 4-6 weeks the larva produces You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
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thread
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcordwirestringyarnhairfiber
thread
is attached
 to the larva. Next
 3-8 days the larva emerged as a cocoon. Then the next
 16 days are crucial for the transition of a Moth. The moth This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 out of the cocoon and after that it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 laying eggs.

For the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 cloth, first
 we need to choose the best cocoon. Secondly
, boil it inside the water. Then unwind it to 300Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "-900 m"-900 m
-900m
 and form like a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcordwirestringyarnhairfiber
thread
. Next
, the loose threads are rotated
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inorder
 to form a strong You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 should be dyed
 according to the color we require. After that remove the dyed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 outside and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 it dry for Possible spelling mistake found.somedaysomewayssome days
somedays
. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
is produced
 and ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 