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The level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live another country

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The chart displays the changes in the number of Bulgarian people with difference education level who leaved their country, over the period 2002 to 2008. The secondary education has the highest percentage in all three years among other education level with 65% in 2002, 61% in 2006, and 59% in 2008. However, the figures in the other categories changed significantly in 2008. There was a sharp rise in the percentage of people with primary and lower education, from 18% in 2002 to 32% in 2008. In contrast, the percentage of higher education people fell dramatically from 20% in 2006 to 9% in 2008. While the general trend for living abroad rose sharply with primary and lower education people, there was a massive reduction in the portion of people with higher education in 2008. The percentage of secondary education Bulgarian population remained approximately the same with the highest figures, over this period.
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level who leaved their country, over the period 2002 to 2008. The secondary
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has the highest
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in all three years among other
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level with 65% in 2002, 61% in 2006, and 59% in 2008.
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with primary and lower
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, from 18% in 2002 to 32% in 2008.
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Bulgarian population remained approximately the same with the highest figures, over this period.
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