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The diagram represents the facilities disposition of City Park prior to and following a new swimming pool facility.

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The diagram represents the facilities disposition of City Park prior to and following a new swimming pool facility. There were some replacements and removed facilities in terms of this new city park construction. It can be seen that the space of the parking lot was limited before the swimming pool was built. The parking lots were divided into 2 areas by the park road, where the entrance was located. All the parking areas were parallel toward two basketball courts and the garden. Meanwhile, the garden area had a fountain inside, which was across from the parking lot. When the construction had finished, the parking lot spaces were centralized in the basketball area. The new parking lots replaced basketball court 2 where it was next to Basketball court 1. This expansion was a result of removing the parking lot in the garden area as a new swimming pool was built. Whereas, a fountain inside the garden had been removed because of expansion for swimming pool area.
The diagram represents the
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facilities
disposition of City Park prior to and following a
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swimming
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pool
facility. There were
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some
replacements and removed facilities in terms of this
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new
city park construction.

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seen
that the space of the
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parking
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lot
was limited
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before
the swimming
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pool
was built
. The
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parking
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lots
were divided
into 2
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areas
by the park road, where the entrance
was located
. All the
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parking
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areas
were parallel toward two
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basketball
courts and the
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garden
. Meanwhile, the
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garden
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area
had a fountain inside, which was across from the
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parking
lot.

When the construction had finished, the
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parking
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lot
spaces
were centralized
in the
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basketball
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area
. The
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parking
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lots
replaced
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basketball
court 2 where it was
next
to
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Basketball
court 1. This expansion was a result of removing the
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parking
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lot
in the
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garden
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area
as a
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new
swimming
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pool
was built
. Whereas, a fountain inside the
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garden
had
been removed
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pool
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IELTS academic The diagram represents the facilities disposition of City Park prior to and following a new swimming pool facility.

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