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The diagrams below show how a hybrid car works, and how it is environmentally friendly.

The diagrams below show how a hybrid car works, and how it is environmentally friendly. BOJ5
This diagram shows the safe operation of a hybrid car for the environment. In general the car takes energy from two resources one of which is a gasoline engine and the other is an electric one which makes it possible to harm the environment less. First, like any other gasoline car, it burns fuel into the engine to generate energy, and then sends it to the transmission. The transmitted power causes the wheel to spin and sets the car in motion. A gasoline car is different from others because it has another source of energy, or rather a battery, which requires less fuel. While driving, it can maintain the energy level and store it in a special unit. When the engine needs additional power, the control unit begins to extract from the battery or from the gasoline engine and directs it to the electric motor. After that, the power is transferred to the transmission and forces the car to move along the road.
This diagram
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shows
the safe operation of a hybrid
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car
for the environment.
In general
the
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car
takes
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energy
from two resources one of which is a
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gasoline
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engine
and the other is an electric one which
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makes
it possible to harm the environment less.

First
, like any other
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gasoline
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car
, it burns fuel into the
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engine
to generate
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energy
, and then
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sends
it to the transmission. The transmitted power causes the wheel to spin and sets the
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car
in motion. A
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gasoline
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car
is
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different
from others
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because
it has another source of
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energy
, or
rather
a battery, which requires less fuel. While driving, it can maintain the
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energy
level and store it in a special unit. When the
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engine
needs additional power, the control unit
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begins
to extract from the battery or from the
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gasoline
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engine
and directs it to the electric motor. After that, the power
is transferred
to the transmission and forces the
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car
to
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move
along the road.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show how a hybrid car works, and how it is environmentally friendly.

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