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the internet has brought about a lot of drawbacks to human beings

the internet has brought about a lot of drawbacks to human beings jDL28
whether the internet is a blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate. Through the media and my own experience, the internet is very useful for our world. First, they provide an uncomfortable source of information and knowledge, the Internet can be said to be a repository of knowledge that helps them easily find information and knowledge whether new or old. Next is to open the world of entertainment, there are countless forms of entertainment such as: Playing games, chatting through forums, social networks, listening to music, watching movies, . . . From there, helping people can relax after stressful and tiring days of work and study. The most important thing is to connect people together, people can chat together, exchange information and experiences on forums, share information and feelings on blogs. Since then, the distance is gradually narrowed, people become closer and can build stronger relationships. During this covid 19 pandemic, there is no shortage of internet, the Internet plays a very important role in the field of education and training. Nowadays, people can completely learn online or train remotely via the Internet. This form helps you save a lot of time or can easily communicate with teachers online when there are questions that need to be answered. The Internet is also considered as the most convenient tool to transmit a large amount of information. large information at fast speed to millions of people worldwide. Like an "encyclopedia", users can easily find all information from anywhere.
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IELTS academic the internet has brought about a lot of drawbacks to human beings

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