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The following line chart illustrates the information about the total of people who moved to the metropolis from the countryside in three various people over the period of 25 years, including the prediction to 2025. In general; all three region rose constantly from 2000 to 2020. The most remarkable rise happened with A bucolic and C. First, it is apparent from the chart that the figure of immigrants relocated to urban areas in the A rustic rose significantly in the first 5 years (from 2000 to 2005), where it nearly doubled. While in bucolic C, saw a tiny change in the figure citizens changed their home to crowded areas. In the next 15 years, both of these figures rocketed to the same level at 80 millions people. In addition, as the prediction for these two people, the figure of people who decided to move away from their hometown to metropolis continue to go up sharply. On the other hand, in 2000, there were only 10 million immigrants in B homey who choose metropolis as a city for their new home. In the next 10 years, saw the gradual increase regarding the same figures. According to the forecast by the expert, this figure will start to level off. In the next 5 years.
The following line chart illustrates the information about the total of
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who
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to the metropolis from the countryside in three various
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over the period of 25 years, including the prediction to 2025.

In general
; all three region rose
constantly
from 2000 to 2020. The most remarkable rise happened with A bucolic and C.

First
, it is apparent from the chart that the
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figure
of immigrants relocated to urban areas in the A rustic rose
significantly
in the
first
5 years (from 2000 to 2005), where it
nearly
doubled. While in bucolic C,
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saw
a tiny
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change
in the
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figure
citizens
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changed
their home to crowded areas. In the
next
15 years, both of these
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figures
rocketed to the same level at 80 millions
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people
.
In addition
, as the prediction for these two
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people
, the
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figure
of
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people
who decided to
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move
away from their hometown to metropolis continue to go up
sharply
.
On the other hand
, in 2000, there were
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only
10 million immigrants in B homey who choose metropolis as a city for their new home. In the
next
10 years,
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saw
the gradual increase regarding the same
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figures
. According to the forecast by the expert, this
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will
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start
to level off. In the
next
5 years.
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6.5
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