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The diagram describes the structure of a home smokey and how it works

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A glance at the illustration provided reveals how a home smokery process works. Overall, looking closer in detail at the diagram, it can be observed that, the smokery procedure consists of fairly three stages to cooking in a home smokery, that located in over ground and underground levels. Firstly, technique commences with fresh air coming through the opened lid inside building, which is located on top at ground level. Afterward, fresh air by changing its direction enters the second part of the construction, which is situated in underground level and the fire is kindled by adding logs through the lid on top. In the next stage, when the logs are burnt, the heat and smoke are passed through a narrow tube that leads to the box, which is on the ground level. The box contains the food (fish or meat), which can be cooked. The separated heat and smoke are used for the smoking.
A glance at the illustration provided reveals how a home
smokery
process works.

Overall
, looking closer in detail at the diagram, it can
be observed
that, the
smokery
procedure consists of
fairly
three stages to cooking in a home
smokery
, that located in over ground and underground levels.

Firstly
, technique commences with fresh air coming through the opened lid inside building, which
is located
on top at ground level. Afterward, fresh air by changing its direction enters the second part of the construction, which
is situated
in underground level and the fire
is kindled
by adding logs through the lid on top.

In the
next
stage, when the logs
are burnt
, the heat and smoke
are passed
through a narrow tube that leads to the box, which is on the ground level. The box contains the food (fish or meat), which can
be cooked
. The separated heat and smoke are
used
for the smoking.
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IELTS academic The diagram describes the structure of a home smokey and how it works

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154 words
6.0
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