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The given pie graphs above illustrate the information about the units of production by fuel sources which were coal, oil, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power in 2 countries which were Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

The given pie graphs above illustrate the information about the units of production by fuel sources which were coal, oil, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power in 2 countries which were Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. yXaxJ
The given pie graphs above illustrate the information about the units of production by fuel sources which were coal, oil, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power in 2 countries which were Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Overall, when looked the pie charts in general, it can be seen that Australia had 100 units in total production in 1980, while it produced 170 units of electricity in total production in 2000. France produced 90 units in 1980. In 2000, it doubled than 1980. Initially, we can see that in Australia, there were 50 units and 10 units of electricity produced by coal and oil, respectively. However, in 2000, coal increased by far the most important to 130 units. Oil decreased gradually, which was from 10 to 2. Another country which was France, there were nuclear power and natural gas, which were 5 and 25, respectively in 1980. Moreover, natural gas went down dramatically from 25 to 2 in 20 periods which were 1980 and 2000. Furthermore, nuclear power soared significantly to 126 units in 2000.
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of production by fuel sources which were coal, oil, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power in 2 countries which were Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

Overall
, when looked the pie charts
in general
, it can be
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that Australia had 100
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in total production in 1980, while it produced 170
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of electricity in total production in 2000. France produced 90
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in 1980. In 2000, it
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doubled
than 1980.

Initially
, we can
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that in Australia, there were 50
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and 10
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of electricity produced by coal and oil,
respectively
.
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, in 2000, coal increased by far the most
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to 130
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. Oil decreased
gradually
, which was from 10 to 2. Another country which was France, there were nuclear power and natural gas, which were 5 and 25,
respectively
in 1980.
Moreover
, natural gas went down
dramatically
from 25 to 2 in 20 periods which were 1980 and 2000.
Furthermore
, nuclear power soared
significantly
to 126
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in 2000.

IELTS academic The given pie graphs above illustrate the information about the units of production by fuel sources which were coal, oil, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power in 2 countries which were Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

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