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The Charts Show What UK Graduates And Post Graduates Did After Leaving College.

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The given charts show what UK graduates and post graduates did after they left university in 2008. The number of students who opted for a full time job after finishing studies is not given. Overall, it can be seen that a large number of both graduates and post graduates went back to universities for further studies. A good proportion of students took up part time jobs. The first chart clearly shows that 29665 students went back to school for further studies whereas only 3500 took up volunteering jobs. Overall, the number of graduates who opted for part time work (17, 735) was slightly higher than those who remained unemployed (16235)Post graduates took more or less the same path as graduates. While 2725 of them returned to college for further studies 2535 of them chose to do part time job. Only 345 students did voluntary work. The difference in number between those who took part in part time jobs and those who were not employed was minimal.
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