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The information regarding the attendance and frequency of people has depicted in the table and in the line graph The proportion of distinct age group of people who were visiting the cinema from 1994 to 2002 has demonstrated. Looking at line graph, 14 to 24-year-old people had visited in cinema at the highest point which was exactly 12% in 1994 while other age groups of people accounted for between 8 to 10% in the same year. All age groups were Increased slightly in 1996. 35 to 49 and 50+ year-old shared the same proportion above 10% then both age group that portion drops gradually to near 4% in 1998. In the year 2000, age group 25 to 34 and 50+ year-old people who visited the cinema at same proportion near about 8% then both age groups were at 8% in 2002. Looking at the table, in the year 1996, 1998, 2002 the attendance of people who visited the cinema was 72% while the 1994 and 2000 they were 67% and 70% respectively. the frequency of people on this year was 10.7 and 8.4. In 1998 a

The information regarding the attendance and frequency of people has depicted in the table and in the line graph The proportion of distinct age group of people who were visiting the cinema from 1994 to 2002 has demonstrated. Looking at line graph, 14 to 24-year-old people had visited in cinema at the highest point which was exactly 12% in 1994 while other age groups of people accounted for between 8 to 10% in the same year. All age groups were Increased slightly in 1996. 35 to 49 and 50+ year-old shared the same proportion above 10% then both age group that portion drops gradually to near 4% in 1998. In the year 2000, age group 25 to 34 and 50+ year-old people who visited the cinema at same proportion near about 8% then both age groups were at 8% in 2002. Looking at the table, in the year 1996, 1998, 2002 the attendance of people who visited the cinema was 72% while the 1994 and 2000 they were 67% and 70% respectively. the frequency of people on this year was 10. 7 and 8. 4. In 1998 a 0gqQ

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