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Expenditure on fast food by income groups in UK

Expenditure on fast food by income groups in UK A1Dn

The given graph represents expenses on fast food in million pounds by income groups in the UK in 1990. The mostly consumed food was a hamburger. Much less eaten food was a pizza at the end of 20th century. According to the bar chart people in the United Kingdom spent about 47 million pounds only for a hamburger with high income. Fish and chips were eaten by population of London varies by 3 million pounds from a pizza. Pizza was less consumed than fish and chips, with average income costs for a hamburger declined rapidly but expenditure on fish and chips increasedby almost 10 million pounds. Intake a hamburger significantly drop from about 33 million to nearly quarter million by low income of British people. Furthermore, a pizza went down. It was the least consumed in 1990. Fish and chips were similar in high income and low income. It is clear from the data with high income people consumed more the hamburgers. On average income fish and chips increased. Pizza went down more in low income.

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