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A weather broadcast contained an information about the weather which had collected up-to-the-minute by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. This information was gained by using a complex computerized phases. The information datas were collected from many places with its tools such as in space using satellite, in the ground using radar, and in the sea using drifting buoy. These tools were compiled the information and result satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. These results were analyzed by the computer and it will broadcast to the tv, radio and the recorded announcenment.

A weather broadcast contained an information about the weather which had collected up-to-the-minute by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. This information was gained by using a complex computerized phases. The information datas were collected from many places with its tools such as in space using satellite, in the ground using radar, and in the sea using drifting buoy. These tools were compiled the information and result satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. These results were analyzed by the computer and it will broadcast to the tv, radio and the recorded announcenment. PlY2
A weather broadcast contained an information about the weather which had collected up-to-the-minute by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. This information was gained by using a complex computerized phases. The information datas were collected from many places with its tools such as in space using satellite, in the ground using radar, and in the sea using drifting buoy. These tools were compiled the information and result satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. These results were analyzed by the computer and it will broadcast to the tv, radio and the recorded announcenment.
A weather broadcast contained an
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information
about the weather which had collected up-to-the-minute by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. This
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information
was gained
by using a complex computerized phases. The
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information
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datas
were collected
from
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many
places with its tools such as in space using satellite, in the ground using radar, and in the sea using drifting buoy. These tools
were compiled
the
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information
and result satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. These results
were analyzed
by the computer and it will broadcast to the
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tv
, radio and the recorded
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announcenment
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IELTS academic A weather broadcast contained an information about the weather which had collected up-to-the-minute by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. This information was gained by using a complex computerized phases. The information datas were collected from many places with its tools such as in space using satellite, in the ground using radar, and in the sea using drifting buoy. These tools were compiled the information and result satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart. These results were analyzed by the computer and it will broadcast to the tv, radio and the recorded announcenment.

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