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The happy valley center between 1982 and 2012.

The happy valley center between 1982 and 2012. b320X

The provided map depicts, the two map various changes in happy valley shoping center. The information is given for the period from 1982 to 2012. Overall, in the happy valley center is contained variety of different spots while, in 2012 there are lot of modifications are held. In 1982, the happy valley shoping center the entertainment area of outline surrounded by large amount of tress. Where the lake was top of the entrance path. To begun with entrance, first look at the lobby area it is near by toilets that besides the left bottom corner. while, it exactly next side was food stores and furniture stores located by the right top and bottom corner respectively. It is noticeable that, in 2012 the south-eastern part were parking lot build when previously there was lake and path stood out. Additionally, the lake was replaced by furniture retail because of the entrance path were made it too short. The sport and electronic stores was allocated and added in southeastern path where as there were the food store and coffee shop was demolished. Moreover, the sports and electronics store changed by themed restaurants. while, the toilets and elevator stood at the same position during same period.

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changes
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given
 for the period from 1982 to 2012.

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, in the happy valley center is contained
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different
 spots while, in 2012 there are It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 modifications are held
.

In 1982, the happy Possible spelling mistake found.valleys hopingvalley hopingvalley shoppingvalley showingvalley shapingvalley sloping
valley shoping
 center the entertainment area of outline surrounded by large amount of tress. “Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where
 the lake was top of the entrance You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwayaislelaneproceduretrackroute
path
. To begun with entrance, first
 look at the lobby area it is Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
 toilets that besides
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left
 bottom corner. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
, it exactly next
 side was food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 and furniture You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 located by the right top and bottom corner respectively
.

It is noticeable that, in 2012 the south-eastern part were parking lot build when previously there was lake and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwayaislelaneproceduretrackroute
path
 stood out. Additionally
, the lake was replaced
 by furniture retail This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the entrance You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwayaislelaneproceduretrackroute
path
were made
 it Did you mean "to"?to
too
 short. The sport and electronic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
was allocated
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in southeastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwayaislelaneproceduretrackroute
path
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where as
 there were the food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 and coffee shop was demolished
. Moreover
, the sports and electronics You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 by themed restaurants. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
, the toilets and elevator stood at the same position during same period. 