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The greenhouse gas emissions for last year by sector for Australia and New Zealand

The pie charts below indicate the exausted greenhouse gas for last year in Australia and New Zealand. The largest type of emissions in both country is Agricultural methane, which takes 29 percents in Australia and 32 percents in New Zealand. The polluted gas, which are from Transport and Electricity generation in Australia, is also take the main place of the chart. In the opposite, The types of greenhouse gas emissions such as waste, agricultural nitous oxide or industrial processes and solvents are recorded in low levels, those are just from 4 percents to 11 percents. In New Zealand, the lowest parts of exausted gas belong to waste. The percents of the gas from Transport and Agrcultural nitous oxide are in the medium level, they just keep 19 percents from Transport and 15 percent from the other. Beside that, the part of the polluted gas from other energy is also worth, which take 16 percents of the pie charts.
The pie charts below indicate the
exausted
greenhouse
gas
for last year in Australia and New Zealand.

The largest type of emissions in both country is Agricultural methane, which takes 29
percents
in Australia and 32
percents
in New Zealand. The polluted
gas
, which are from Transport and Electricity generation in Australia, is
also
take the main place of the chart. In the opposite, The types of greenhouse
gas
emissions such as waste, agricultural
nitous
oxide or industrial processes and solvents
are recorded
in low levels, those are
just
from 4
percents
to 11
percents
. In New Zealand, the lowest parts of
exausted
gas
belong to waste. The
percents
of the
gas
from Transport and
Agrcultural
nitous
oxide are in the medium level, they
just
keep
19
percents
from Transport and 15
percent
from the other.
Beside
that, the part of the polluted
gas
from other energy is
also
worth, which take 16
percents
of the pie charts.
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IELTS academic The greenhouse gas emissions for last year by sector for Australia and New Zealand

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