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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The scheme below illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles. Overall, the process has 8 steps from Flour form till being ready for the market. First of all, the main ingredient flour is brought to the storage silos. Then it is sent to the step, where it is mixed with other ingredients, water and oil. Then it goes through rollers as form of dough sheets. After that dough strips. Then strips come as round-shaped noodles. The following step is cooking them in oil and drying them. After that process, noodles is delivered to packaging. There, noodles are put into cups and added vegetables and spices. The last step is attaching labels. After labeling and sealing, noodles are ready to deliver markets and shops. Overall, noodles production is quite long process. And goes through many steps

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. The following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
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added
 vegetables and spices. The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
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 is attaching labels. After labeling and sealing, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
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 are ready to deliver markets and shops. Overall
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