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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of children in two different age groups in an average class in different countries.

The bar chart displays the hours per week that teenegers in Chester spend performing certain activities during the period of 2002 to 2007. Overall, The hour spent on watching television was the tallest among others, in contrast with bowling which was lowest. To begin, during the given time period, watching television always remained the highest practice that teenagers had conducted, with its lowest being at 25 during 2002 and its peak almost reached 40 during 2007. The graph was a steady rise, which is similiar to shopping. Moving on, watching DVDS was the second highest action that adolesence spent time on. However, its tallest only about the half of television's. Moving on, discos and pubs had a leap duirng 2007. On the other side, activities that does not generally require elctronic gadgets such as finishing homework or playing sport had similair ratio(about 10 to 15). However, some sport like bowling was shown to have low participates, not reaching 5 hours in every years given.
The bar chart displays the hours per week that
teenegers
in Chester spend performing certain activities during the period of 2002 to 2007.
Overall
, The hour spent on watching television was the tallest among others,
in contrast
with bowling which was lowest.

To
begin
, during the
given
time period, watching television always remained the highest practice that
teenagers
had conducted, with its lowest being at 25 during 2002 and its peak almost reached 40 during 2007. The graph was a steady rise, which is
similiar
to shopping. Moving on, watching
DVDS
was the second highest action that
adolesence
spent time on.
However
, its tallest
only
about the half of television's. Moving on, discos and pubs had a leap
duirng
2007.

On the other side, activities that does not
generally
require
elctronic
gadgets such as finishing homework or playing sport had
similair
ratio(about 10 to 15).
However
,
some
sport
like bowling
was shown
to have low participates, not reaching 5 hours in every years
given
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the number of children in two different age groups in an average class in different countries.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
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