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The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show changes in UK spending patterns between 1971 and 30 years later, 2001. As an overall trend, increased amounts of money spent on cars, computers and eating out were made up for by drops in expenditure on food and books. In detail, food and car made up the two biggest item of expenditure in both years. Together they comprised over half of household spending in the UK. Food accounted for 44% of spending in 1971, but this dropped by two thirds to 14% in 2001. However, the outlay on cars doubled, rising from 22% in 1971 to 43% in 2001. Other areas changed significantly. Spending on eating out dou bled, climbing from 7% to 14%. The proportion of salary spent on computers increased dramatically, up from 2% in 1971 to 12% in 2001. However, as computer expenditure rose, the percentage of outlay on books plunged from 6% to 1%.
The pie charts
show
changes
in UK
spending
patterns between 1971 and 30 years later, 2001.

As an
overall
trend, increased amounts of money spent on cars, computers and eating out
were made
up for by drops in expenditure on food and books. In detail, food and car made up the two biggest item of expenditure in both years. Together they comprised over half of household
spending
in the UK. Food accounted for 44% of
spending
in 1971,
but
this dropped by two thirds to 14% in 2001.
However
, the outlay on cars doubled, rising from 22% in 1971 to 43% in 2001.

Other areas
changed
significantly
.
Spending
on eating out dou bled, climbing from 7% to 14%. The proportion of salary spent on computers increased
dramatically
, up from 2% in 1971 to 12% in 2001.
However
, as computer expenditure rose, the percentage of outlay on books plunged from 6% to 1%.

IELTS academic The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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