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The chart illustrates the average percentage of uk citizens who consumed five portion of fruits and vegetable on daily basis from the year 2001 to 2008.

The chart illustrates the average percentage of uk citizens who consumed five portion of fruits and vegetable on daily basis from the year 2001 to 2008. Overall, females were dominant among males and children in all the respective years with increased fruits and vegetables intake. Initially from the year 2001 to 2003, the percentage of males and children who ate fruits and vegetable remained static at approximately 18% which gradually increased to 20 and 25% respectively in the year 2005. However, in 2006 and 2007 around 28% of male population of uk included five portions of fruits and vegetable in their daily diet. On the other hand, in 2006 more than 30% of female citizen ate portions of fruits and vegetable which decreased to 28% in 2008. Moreover, an increased from 12% to 25% is observed among children from the year 2003 to 2007. Female citizens of uk ate five portions of fruits and vegetables as compared to male and children. However, an increasing trend has been seen in males and children from 2003 onwards.
The chart illustrates the average percentage of uk citizens who consumed five
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remained static at approximately 18% which
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respectively
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2005.
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, in 2006 and 2007 around 28% of male population of uk included five
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which decreased to 28% in 2008.
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2003 to 2007.

Female citizens of uk
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