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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999 0AnRQ
The figure/ pie chart compares the percentage of visitors who came to four different tourist destinations in Britain in 1999. Overall, Museum/Galleries and Theme Parks received the most visitor’s attentions, at least two times higher than those of two remaining places. For the subplaces in Theme Park sector, Blackpool Pleasure Beach saw by far the highest proportion of visitors. It can be seen that there was only 9% of surveyed visitors came to Wildlife Parks & Zoo place, making it the lowest rate in the chart. Meanwhile, the two tourist destinations, Theme Parks and Museums/Galleries were the most visited, by 38% and 37%, respectively. The third largest number is the Historic Houses & Monuments (16%), which is nearly twice as larger as that of Wildlife Parks and Zoo place. Looking at the information of the Theme Parks in more detail, Blackpool Pleasure Beach welcomed 47% of people, followed by the Alton Towers, Pleasureland-southport, at 17% and 16%, correspondingly. The Legoland/ Windsor and Chessington World Adventure had the same percentages of visitors, 10 % for each.
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tourist destinations in Britain in 1999.

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, Museum/Galleries and
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Theme
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Parks
received the most
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visitor’s
attentions, at least two times higher than those of two remaining places. For the
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subplaces
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Theme
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Park
sector, Blackpool Pleasure Beach
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saw
by far the highest proportion of visitors.

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that there was
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9% of surveyed
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came to Wildlife
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Parks
& Zoo place, making it the lowest rate in the chart. Meanwhile, the two tourist destinations,
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Theme
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Parks
and Museums/Galleries were the most visited, by 38% and 37%,
respectively
. The third largest number is the Historic
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Houses
& Monuments (16%), which is
nearly
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as
that of Wildlife
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Parks
and Zoo place.

Looking at the information of the
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Theme
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in more detail, Blackpool Pleasure Beach welcomed 47% of
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people
, followed by the Alton Towers,
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Pleasureland-southport
, at 17% and 16%,
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. The
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Legoland
/ Windsor and
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Chessington
World Adventure had the same percentages of
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visitors
, 10 % for each.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999

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