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The graphs below show the viewership of different TV programmes among three different age groups. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the viewership of different TV programmes among three different age groups. OLRE
The given pie charts compare the different types of TV programmes watched by 10-15, 16-20 and 21-25 year olds. It is clear that watching news is more popular among the older age groups whereas sport is less popular among the older age groups. Among the 10-15 year olds, cartoon and sport programs are equally popular with a little over a quarter each viewing such programs. Drama is liked by 23% and films by 19% of this age group. News programs are watched by a small minority (6%) of these adolescents. Moving over to the 16-20 age group, drama is the most popular with 30% watching drama. Films are the second most popular programs in this age group. Cartoons and sports are almost equally popular at 15 and 14% respectively. Surprisingly, news are three times as popular in this age group than the 10-15 year olds. Talking about the 21-25 year age group, the popularity of news is double of that of the 16-20 year olds with 33% of this group watching news. Drama, films and cartoons are almost equally popular in this age group with around 20% watching these programs. Watching sports is the least popular among this age group with only 4% viewership. Overall it can be seen that watching news is more popular among the older age groups and drama programs are the favourites of the 16-20 year olds.
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programmes
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watched
by 10-15, 16-20

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and
21-25
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year
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clear
that watching
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news
is more
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popular
among the older
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age


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groups
whereas sport is less
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popular
among the older
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age
groups.

Among the 10-15
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year
olds, cartoon and sport
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programs
are
equally
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popular
with a
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little


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over
a quarter each viewing such
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programs
. Drama
is liked
by 23% and films by 19% of
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this


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age
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group
.
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News
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programs
are
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watched
by a
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small
minority (6%) of these adolescents.

Moving over to the 16-20
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age
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group
, drama is the most
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popular
with 30% watching drama.

Films are the second most
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popular
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programs
in this
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age
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group
. Cartoons and sports
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are


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almost
equally
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popular
at 15 and 14%
respectively
.
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,
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news
are three times as

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popular
in this
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age
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group
than the 10-15
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year
olds.

Talking about the 21-25
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year
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age
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group
, the popularity of
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news
is double of that of the 16-20

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year
olds with 33% of this
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group
watching
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news
. Drama, films and cartoons are almost

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equally
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popular
in this
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age
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group
with around 20% watching these
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programs
. Watching

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sports
is the least
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among this
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age
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with
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only
4% viewership.

Overall
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seen
that watching
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news
is more
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among the older
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age
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and

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drama
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programs
are the
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favourites
of the 16-20
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olds.

IELTS academic The graphs below show the viewership of different TV programmes among three different age groups.

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