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The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students, an average, at one university, in 2000 and in 2010

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The given is a pie chart comparing proportion of expenditure by students, n average, at one university, over a decade starting from 2000What stand from out that in 2000 and in 2010 the highest proportion of expenditure by students was food and drink approximately 29 %It is clear that, in 2000 the eating out was 4 % and in 2010 the eating out was 8 %. Clothing and transport was 8 and 16 percent respectively. Utilities electricity of water was 21 % in 2010 and 2010 this electricity was 27 %. In 2000 and 2010 sports and cultural and holidays was 5 and 17 percent respectively.
The
given
is a pie chart comparing proportion of expenditure by students, n average, at one university, over a decade starting from 2000What stand from out that in 2000 and in 2010 the highest proportion of expenditure by students was food and drink approximately 29
%It
is
clear
that, in 2000 the eating out was 4 % and in 2010 the eating out was 8 %. Clothing and transport was 8 and 16 percent
respectively
. Utilities electricity of water was 21 % in 2010 and 2010 this electricity was 27 %. In 2000 and 2010 sports and cultural and holidays was 5 and 17 percent
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students, an average, at one university, in 2000 and in 2010

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