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The graphs below show the post school qualifications hold by Canadians.

The graphs below show the post school qualifications hold by Canadians. okgWg
The given graphs indicate the numbers of different age groups from Canada among 25 and 35 also 45 and 55 for holding degree in their main field after completing school. Overall, it can be easily seen thay Canadians preference in study for degree shows the little bit changes in main fields. It elucidates that both groups had same main fields and same first priority too, in social science, arts. Then for education and administration were mostly same percentage respectively, 15 and 19 for age group 25 to 35 and 13 % and 15 % for 45 to 55 aged. Whereas among 25 and 35, 18 % citizens of Canada were hold degree in science, maths, computers. And for 45 and 55 it was just 10%. There were engineering, humanities, nursing, MAB and others. Respectively, 9, 4, 7, 6, 2 in percentage for aged 25 amd 35 and it is opposite for 45 and 55 age group that it was all higher except mba Respectively, 19, 5, 11, 3 in percentage.
The
given
graphs indicate the numbers of
different
age
groups
from Canada among 25 and 35
also
45 and 55 for holding degree in their main field after completing school.

Overall
, it can be
easily
seen
thay
Canadians preference in study for degree
shows
the
little bit
changes
in main fields.

It elucidates that both
groups
had same main fields and same
first
priority too, in social science, arts. Then for education and administration were
mostly
same percentage
respectively
, 15 and 19 for age
group
25 to 35 and 13 % and 15 % for 45 to 55 aged.

Whereas among 25 and 35, 18 % citizens of Canada
were
hold degree in science,
maths
, computers. And for 45 and 55 it was
just
10%. There were engineering, humanities, nursing,
MAB
and others
.
Respectively
, 9, 4, 7, 6, 2 in percentage for aged 25
amd
35 and it is opposite for 45 and 55 age
group
that it was all higher except
mba
Respectively
, 19, 5, 11, 3 in percentage.

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