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The graphs below show the opening and closure of magazines and the types of magazines that opened in Southern Europe between 1995-2015

The graphs below show the opening and closure of magazines and the types of magazines that opened in Southern Europe between 1995-2015 bDPKl

The column graph demonstrates the number of opened and closed shops, while the pie chart illustrates five types of magazines that were opened in the Southern Europe during the period of two decades. During the years of 1995 to 2005 it is clear that the number of opened magazines was very high. In 1995 opening of magazines was 250. Although in 2000 it reached peak at 400, this number started to drop slowly when in 2010 it became 220 only. In 2015 there was a big contrast among them. The closure of magazines reached approximately 400, meanwhile the opening became 170. Looking for the details to the types of magazines it is obvious that people find the theme of music as the most interesting (35% of total amount). The second one was about entertainment and TV that is 30%. The theme of hobbies was not so popular (21%). The least interesting themes were about business, finance, politics and other that 9% and 5%. Overall, it is evident that in last decade there was a high number of closing magazines. Therefore music, entertainment and TV were genres of magazines

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