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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how YgDad
The pie chart illustrates the impression of hotel consumers at the Parkway Hotel for customer's service from 100 visitors in 2005 and 2010. Overall, in both years the rating was remarkably different and observed many changes throughout the given period. In 2005, slightly less than half of visitors ranked satisfactory 45% which was the highest percentage. Following that 21% of people voted poor and 15% very poor in the first year. However, that wasn't the lowest percentage, guests also ranked the hotel's customer service as a good and excellent which is 14% and 5% respectively. In the second year, all rankings fluctuated enormously. People who voted good increased by 25% and it situated the biggest section of the pie chart. Furthermore, visitors who voted excellent also observed a dramatic increase which is 5% to 28%. Nevertheless, there are also factors that decreased substantially. Starting with satisfactory and poor, the percentage for these sections fell to 17% and 12% respectively. Finally, guests who ranked the hotel's customer service as a very poor declined by 11%.
The pie chart illustrates the impression of hotel consumers at the Parkway Hotel for customer's service from 100 visitors in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, in both years the rating was
remarkably
different
and observed
many
changes
throughout the
given
period.

In 2005,
slightly
less than half of visitors ranked satisfactory 45% which was the highest percentage. Following that 21% of
people
voted
poor
and 15%
very
poor
in the
first
year.
However
, that wasn't the lowest percentage, guests
also
ranked the hotel's customer service as a
good
and excellent which is 14% and 5%
respectively
.

In the second year, all rankings fluctuated
enormously
.
People
who voted
good
increased by 25% and it situated the biggest section of the pie chart.
Furthermore
, visitors who voted excellent
also
observed a dramatic increase which is 5% to 28%.
Nevertheless
, there are
also
factors that decreased
substantially
. Starting with satisfactory and
poor
, the percentage for these sections fell to 17% and 12%
respectively
.
Finally
, guests who ranked the hotel's customer service as a
very
poor
declined by 11%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
174 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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