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The graphs below show the number of drivers in Britain who have been caught driving too fast by speed cameras placed on roads, and the number of people killed in road accidents, over an eight-year period since the introduction of speed cameras. The tables show the results of a survey on people's opinions on speed cameras.

The graphs below show the number of drivers in Britain who have been caught driving too fast by speed cameras placed on roads, and the number of people killed in road accidents, over an eight-year period since the introduction of speed cameras. The tables show the results of a survey on people's opinions on speed cameras. 0AWpG
While the graphs illustrate the number of Britain drivers who have been detected driving too fast by cameras installed on roads, as well as the number of casualties over an eight-year-period; the tables give information on how people think about speed cameras via a poll result. In general, even though more and more drivers are fined, the number of deaths caused by traffic accident changes slightly with the negative opinion of citizens against speed cameras. It can be seen obviously that the number of drivers violating speed limit rises dramatically, starting at 200. 000 and then rocket to 1. 600. 000 in the period. In other words, the data for careless drivers in the 8th year is eight times higher than in the 1st year. In contrast, the number of fatalities caused by road accidents fluctuates with small dips in the 4th and 6th years. Clear perspectives of people about speed cameras can be drawn from the tables. Nearly two third of participants think that speed cameras are ineffective in reducing traffic collisions. In addition, 74% of interviewees believe that the purpose of setting up cameras is not for road safety and more than half subscribe to the idea that those cameras are redundant.
While the graphs illustrate the
number
of Britain
drivers
who have
been detected
driving too
fast
by
cameras
installed on roads,
as well
as the
number
of casualties over an eight-year-period; the tables give information on how
people
think
about
speed
cameras
via a poll result.
In general
,
even though
more and more
drivers
are fined
, the
number
of deaths caused by traffic accident
changes
slightly
with the
negative
opinion of citizens against
speed
cameras.

It can be
seen
obviously
that the
number
of
drivers
violating
speed
limit rises
dramatically
, starting at 200. 000 and then rocket to 1. 600. 000 in the period.
In other words
, the data for careless
drivers
in the 8th year is eight times higher than in the 1st year.
In contrast
, the
number
of fatalities caused by road accidents fluctuates with
small
dips in the 4th and 6th years.

Clear
perspectives of
people
about
speed
cameras
can
be drawn
from the tables.
Nearly
two third of participants
think
that
speed
cameras
are ineffective in reducing traffic collisions.
In addition
, 74% of interviewees believe that the purpose of setting up
cameras
is not for road safety and more than half subscribe to the
idea
that those
cameras
are redundant.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the number of drivers in Britain who have been caught driving too fast by speed cameras placed on roads, and the number of people killed in road accidents, over an eight-year period since the introduction of speed cameras. The tables show the results of a survey on people's opinions on speed cameras.

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