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Switzerland birth and death scales between 1970 to 2020 based on United Nation data

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The bar chart illustrates Switzerland birth and death scales between 1970 to 2020 based on United Nation data. In general, the number of birth showed a gradual increase throughout the period given. Conversely, the scale of death had a tendency to decrease over the last twenty years. In the first year, 1970, birth is higher than the death scale. Then, in the next ten years, both figures experienced a different trend, in which the death rate rose to 1. 3 million, while births remained constant in 1. 2 million. However, from 1990 to 2000 Switzerland experienced rapid growth in a birth proportion to 2. 5 million and peaked at 3. 2 million in 2020. In contrast, the scale of death declined gradually from 1. 5 million in 1990 to eight hundred thousand in 2020, according to the United Nations statistics.
The bar chart illustrates Switzerland
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between 1970 to 2020
based on United Nation data.
In general
, the number of
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birth
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showed
a gradual increase throughout the period
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Conversely
, the
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of death had a tendency to decrease over the last twenty years.

In the
first
year, 1970,
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birth
is higher than the death
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scale
. Then, in the
next
ten years, both figures experienced a
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different
trend, in which the death rate rose to 1. 3
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million
, while
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births
remained constant in 1. 2 million.

However
, from 1990 to 2000 Switzerland experienced rapid growth in a
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birth
proportion to 2. 5
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million
and peaked at 3. 2
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million
in 2020.
In contrast
, the
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scale
of death declined
gradually
from 1. 5
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million
in 1990 to eight hundred thousand in 2020, according to the United Nations statistics.
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IELTS academic Switzerland birth and death scales between 1970 to 2020 based on United Nation data

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