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Radio and television audiences in UK throughout the day in 1992

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The line graph depicts the radio and television audiences, in percentage of the UK population over 4 years old, throughout the day in 1992. Overall, the number of audiences for both radio and TV varied heavily throughout the day. It can also be seen from the graph that the peak number of audiences for radio and television occurred at different times of the day. The number of radio listeners increased rapidly from 6 AM until it reached the peak of just under 30% at around 9 AM. From that point, the number of audiences gradually decreased, with a little spike at 4 PM and 10 PM, until its lowest point at 2 AM with only around 2%. Finally, the number increased again from 2 AM onwards. The number of people who watched TV in the morning were fluctuating and stayed under 10% until noon, where it increased rapidly until the peak of almost 50% at 8 PM. The number stayed almost level until 9 PM, then dropped to just 2% at around 3 AM. After that, there was a slight increase to around 3% at 6 AM.
The line graph depicts the
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radio
and television
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audiences
, in percentage of the UK population over 4 years
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old
, throughout the day in 1992.

Overall
, the
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number
of
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audiences
for both
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radio
and TV varied
heavily
throughout the day. It can
also
be
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seen
from the graph that the peak
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number
of
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audiences
for
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radio
and television occurred at
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different
times of the day.

The
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number
of
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radio
listeners increased
rapidly
from 6 AM until it reached the peak of
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just
under 30% at
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around
9 AM. From that point, the
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number
of
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audiences
gradually
decreased, with a
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little
spike at 4 PM and 10 PM, until its lowest point at 2 AM with
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only
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around
2%.
Finally
, the
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number
increased again from 2 AM onwards.

The
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of
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people
who
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watched
TV in the morning were fluctuating and stayed under 10% until noon, where it increased
rapidly
until the peak of almost 50% at 8 PM. The
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number
stayed almost level until 9 PM, then dropped to
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just
2% at
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around
3 AM. After that, there was a slight increase to
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around
3% at 6 AM.
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IELTS academic Radio and television audiences in UK throughout the day in 1992

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