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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given chart illustrates the unemployment situation in Austraila in the year 2012. The chart shows the percentage of unemployment rate in rural areas as well as in urban areas accourding to the quarters of the year. Firstly, rural areas and urban areas both opposite from each other. Where the percentage(%) of urban areas decreases the % of rural areas increases. In rural areas, the cutback rate in Australia, 2012 in first quarter of the year is 6. 5% and is in the decreasing form till second Quarter upto 4. 5%, then both increased and decreased in th third quarters from 4. 5% to 5. 5% to 5% and then slightly increased approximately 5. 4%. and then fall upto 5% in the end of the fourth quarter. Secondly in urban areas, percentage grows up from 2. 2% approximately and is nonstop till the second quarter of the year. From second to third quarter % got decreased upto 2. 1% approx. and then suddden increase in the % till the third quarter ends and then decreased slightly to 3. 7% approx. and enlarged to 4. 9% at the end of the year which is fourth quarter. Overall, both rural and urban areas are facing the opposites from each other in both increasing and decreasing order.
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chart illustrates the unemployment situation in
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Austraila
in the year 2012. The chart
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the percentage of unemployment rate in
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rural
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as well
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urban
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accourding
to the
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quarters
of the year.

Firstly
,
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rural
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and
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urban
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both
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Where
the percentage(%) of
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urban
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areas
decreases the % of
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rural
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areas
increases. In
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rural
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areas
, the cutback rate in Australia, 2012 in
first
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quarter
of the year is 6. 5% and is in the decreasing form till second
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Quarter
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upto
4. 5%, then both increased and decreased in
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th
third
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quarters
from 4.
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5%
to 5.
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5%
to 5% and then
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increased approximately 5. 4%.
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upto
5% in the
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end
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Secondly
in
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urban
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, percentage grows up from 2. 2% approximately and is nonstop till the second
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quarter
of the year.

From second to third
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%
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got
decreased
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upto
2. 1% approx. and then
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suddden
increase in the % till the third
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ends and then decreased
slightly
to 3. 7% approx. and enlarged to 4. 9% at the
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end
of the year which is fourth quarter.

Overall
, both
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and
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are facing the opposites from each other in both increasing and decreasing order.
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