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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. m1L28

The graph illustrates about the enrolments made for the australian universities by local and overseas students over a decade. The results depicts that the commencing of overseas students versus the total students enrolled had acceptable difference compared to the local students. Overall, the abroad students enrolled in universities seems to less in early decade, however had a siginficant rise was seen at the end of the decade. Although the interest among overseas students increased gradually in enrollment but didnt encourage them to commence the courses. Example in 2001 there were nearly 20000 students enrolled but only 15000 started the race which saw huge downfall in late 2000's with nearly 80000 students enrolled where only half of the total students appeared for the universities. On other hand, looking into the status of local students, there interest towards the academic had seen enormous amount of enrollment as the years keep increasing and reached a stability in late 2000's. Even though enrollment interest reached the sky it wasn't the case coming to students those who turned up for the program for they applied. From the begining of the 21st century if students enrolled in the course will be less than the half ratio people started the academic journey. example in 2004 pupil enrolled was 55000 whereas those who came to universities were just approximately 19000. which was continued to be the same throughout the decade.

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