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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. RP0Q
The two graphs represent the enrolment of students from Australia and other countries in several Australian universities from the year 2001-2010. It includes both local and international students. The graph indicating the proportion of overseas students in Australian universities sees a steady rise from the start to the end of the recording period. The number of international students enrolled in the last four years was above 5000 each year. On the other hand, the graph representing the local students is seem to have a high volume of them from the beginning and ended with enrolling approximately around one lakh Australian students in the last four years. Overall, it can be seen that Australia is a popular choice for students who aspire to study abroad.
The two graphs represent the
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enrolment
of
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students
from Australia and other countries in several Australian universities from the year 2001-2010. It includes both local and international students.

The graph indicating the proportion of overseas
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students
in Australian universities
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sees
a steady rise from the
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start
to the
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end
of the recording period. The number of international
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students
enrolled in the last four years was above 5000 each year.

On the other hand
, the graph representing the local
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students
is
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seem
to have a high volume of them from the beginning and ended with enrolling approximately around one lakh Australian
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students
in the last four years.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that Australia is a popular choice for
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students
who aspire to study abroad.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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