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The given bar graph demonstrates two types of housings (owned and rented) between the time period of 1918 and 2011 in two different places, England and wales.

The given bar graph demonstrates two types of housings (owned and rented) between the time period of 1918 and 2011 in two different places, England and wales. 155bA

The given bar graph demonstrates two types of housings (owned and rented) between the time period of 1918 and 2011 in two different places, England and wales. The calibration of data is done in percentage. Overall, it is conspicuous that rented spaces were highest during 1918 and by the end of the surveyed time period their owned counterparts dominated the trend. First of all, in the year 1918, rented housings were at its peak at around 76% while owned housings stood at only around 23%. However, both types of accommodations hit a plateau between the years of 1939 and 1953 at 68% and 32%, rented and owned spaces, respectively. The following years, on the other hand, found a steady fall in the families who lived on rent and a ceiling trend in those who owned a house. Interestingly, in the year 2011, both the trajectories experienced a slight change, with owned houses dropping from 68% to around 63%, while rented houses took a leap from 31% to approximately 37%.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 bar graph demonstrates two types of housings (This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
 and rented) between the time period of 1918 and 2011 in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 places, England and wales. The calibration of data is done
 in percentage.

Overall
, it is conspicuous that rented spaces were highest during 1918 and by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the surveyed time period their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 counterparts dominated the trend.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1918, rented housings were at its peak at around 76% while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 housings stood at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 around 23%. However
, both types of accommodations hit a plateau between the years of 1939 and 1953 at 68% and 32%, rented and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 spaces, respectively
.

The following years, on the other hand
, found a steady fall in the families who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 on rent and a ceiling trend in those who You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Interestingly
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2011, both the trajectories experienced a slight This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
, with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 dropping from 68% to around 63%, while rented This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 took a leap from 31% to approximately 37%. 